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oxygenxml · Feb 6, 2024 · 80b4b90 · 80b4b90
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diff --git a/topics/types_of_companies_which_would_benefit_from_the_dita_xml_standard.dita b/topics/types_of_companies_which_would_benefit_from_the_dita_xml_standard.dita
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 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <!DOCTYPE topic PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DITA Topic//EN" "topic.dtd">
 <topic id="types_of_companies_which_would_benefit_from_the_dita_xml_standard">
-    <title>Types Of Companies Which Would Benefit from the DITA XML Standard</title>
+    <title>Types Of Companies Who Would Benefit From Using the DITA XML Standard</title>
     <prolog>
         <author>Radu Coravu</author>
         <critdates>
             <created date="2023-12-31"/>
         </critdates>
     </prolog>
     <body>
-        <p>I would divide in general the companies which benefit from using DITA XML for their
+        <p>In general, I would divide the companies that benefit from using DITA XML for their
             technical documentation needs in three large sections:</p>
         <dl id="dl_rtq_yb1_h1c">
             <dlentry>
                 <dt>Companies Creating Physical Products</dt>
                 <dd>
-                    <p>These companies create real-world objects, be them cars, refrigerators or
+                    <p>These companies create real-world objects, such as cars, refrigerators, or
                         computer chips. Each version of each product has an unique product ID and
                         needs to be documented. Different products are sometimes similar in
                         functionality but they also have some differences.</p>
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
             <dlentry>
                 <dt>Companies Creating Version-ed Software Products</dt>
                 <dd>
-                    <p>These companies provide software components which are version-ed and usually
+                    <p>These companies provide software components that are version-ed and usually
                         get installed on the client's side. As each client may have an older version
                         of the product, user manuals for older versions need to be made
                         available.</p>
@@ -33,14 +33,13 @@
             <dlentry>
                 <dt>Companies Creating Version-less Software Products</dt>
                 <dd>
-                    <p>These companies usually provide cloud based services, the end user receives
-                        always access to the latest stable release, there is no user manual made
-                        available for past releases.</p>
+                    <p>These companies usually provide cloud-based services, the end-user always
+                        receives access to the latest stable release, and there is no user manual
+                        made available for past releases.</p>
                 </dd>
             </dlentry>
         </dl>
-        <p>The benefits for companies would be the following:<table frame="all" colsep="1"
-                rowsep="1">
+        <p>The benefits for companies would be as follows:<table frame="all" colsep="1" rowsep="1">
                 <title>Benefits</title>
                 <tgroup cols="4">
                     <colspec colname="c1" colnum="1" colwidth="1*"/>