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 ## Profile
 
 Ani grew up in a single-parent household.
-She has helped many people.
+Her selflessness has touched the lives of many.
 But in the end, she, who gave others hope, wasn't able to escape death herself.
 
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@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ On that day, Ani fulfilled her last plan to leave silently.
 Yet, her death was sudden and shocking.
 
 > Maybe separation is not that awful.
-> When we are dissolved into wind after millions of hours,
+> When we are dissolved into the wind after millions of hours,
 > we will be reunited as bubbles in the same cup of beer.
 > No atoms can truly be destroyed in the universe.
 > Sooner or later, we will be together again.
@@ -42,17 +42,17 @@ Her death was confirmed by [方方](https://twitter.com/fang050722) and [铃木
 This world does not deserve you.
 May the other side treat you well.
 May you share the joy with those who travel together with you,
-on the train traveling through the starry sky.
+on the train travelling through the starry sky.
 
 Death is not the end.
 We will meet under the sky of a more loving world.
-Wish you have the happiness that you missed.
+I wish you the happiness that you missed.
 
 > A gentle and kind-hearted friend,
 > always thinking about others,
 > compassionate to a fault.
-> Tried to take care of friends when she should have had taken care of herself;
-> shouldered everything herself to not bother anyone else.
+> Tried to take care of friends when she should have taken care of herself;
+> shouldered everything herself so as not bother anyone else.
 
 Ani was outed on October 22nd.
 [Elihuso](https://twitter.com/ElihusoQ) sought help for her by explaining her situation online.
@@ -62,5 +62,5 @@ However, she rejected every offer of help.
 > I already went against it twice.
 > Once, twice, there will not be a third.
 
-At night, when we look at Betelgeuse, the brightest star in this starry sky,
-you will be waving at us, smiling.
+At night, when we look at Betelgeuse, the brightest star in this starry sky:
+You will be waving at us, smiling.