Merge branch 'current' into nfiann-ADOandSSO

website/docs/docs/cloud/manage-access/set-up-snowflake-oauth.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ This guide describes a feature of the dbt Cloud Enterprise plan. If you’re int
 
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-dbt Cloud Enterprise supports [OAuth authentication](https://docs.snowflake.net/manuals/user-guide/oauth-intro.html) with Snowflake. When Snowflake OAuth is enabled, users can authorize their Development credentials using Single Sign On (SSO) via Snowflake rather than submitting a username and password to dbt Cloud. If Snowflake is setup with SSO through a third-party identity provider, developers can use this method to log into Snowflake and authorize the dbt Development credentials without any additional setup.
+dbt Cloud Enterprise supports [OAuth authentication](https://docs.snowflake.net/manuals/user-guide/oauth-intro.html) with Snowflake. When Snowflake OAuth is enabled, users can authorize their Development credentials using Single Sign On (SSO) via Snowflake rather than submitting a username and password to dbt Cloud. If Snowflake is set up with SSO through a third-party identity provider, developers can use this method to log into Snowflake and authorize the dbt Development credentials without any additional setup.
 
 To set up Snowflake OAuth in dbt Cloud, admins from both are required for the following steps:
 1. [Locate the redirect URI value](#locate-the-redirect-uri-value) in dbt Cloud.
@@ -22,10 +22,10 @@ To use Snowflake in the dbt Cloud IDE, all developers must [authenticate with Sn
 ### Locate the redirect URI value
 
 To get started, copy the connection's redirect URI from dbt Cloud:
-1. Navigate to **Account settings**
-1. Select **Projects** and choose a project from the list 
-1. Select the connection to view its details abd set the **OAuth method** to "Snowflake SSO"
-1. Copy the **Redirect URI** for use in later steps
+1. Navigate to **Account settings**.
+1. Select **Projects** and choose a project from the list. 
+1. Select the connection to view its details and set the **OAuth method** to "Snowflake SSO".
+1. Copy the **Redirect URI** to use in the later steps.
 
 <Lightbox
 	src="/img/docs/dbt-cloud/dbt-cloud-enterprise/snowflake-oauth-redirect-uri.png"
@@ -37,11 +37,7 @@ To get started, copy the connection's redirect URI from dbt Cloud:
 
 In Snowflake, execute a query to create a security integration. Please find the complete documentation on creating a security integration for custom clients [here](https://docs.snowflake.net/manuals/sql-reference/sql/create-security-integration.html#syntax). 
 
-In the following `CREATE OR REPLACE SECURITY INTEGRATION` example query, replace `<REDIRECT_URI>` with the [appropriate Access URL](/docs/cloud/about-cloud/access-regions-ip-addresses) for your region and plan. You can find this in dbt Cloud by:
-- Navigating to **Account settings**  and then **Connections**. 
-- Click on the Snowflake connection. 
-- Copy the URL under **Redirect URI**.
-<Lightbox src="/img/docs/dbt-cloud/access-control/oauth-connections.jpg" width="70%" title="Copy the 'Redirect URI' URL in dbt Cloud and replace it in the 'REDIRECT_URI' field." />
+In the following `CREATE OR REPLACE SECURITY INTEGRATION` example query, replace `<REDIRECT_URI>` value with the Redirect URI (also referred to as the [access URL](/docs/cloud/about-cloud/access-regions-ip-addresses)) copied in dbt Cloud. To locate the Redirect URI, refer to the previous [locate the redirect URI value](#locate-the-redirect-uri-value) section.
 
 ```
 CREATE OR REPLACE SECURITY INTEGRATION DBT_CLOUD
@@ -94,11 +90,11 @@ Enter the Client ID and Client Secret into dbt Cloud to complete the creation of
 
 <Lightbox src="/img/docs/dbt-cloud/dbt-cloud-enterprise/database-connection-snowflake-oauth.png" title="Configuring Snowflake OAuth credentials in dbt Cloud" />
 
-### Authorize Developer Credentials
+### Authorize developer credentials
 
 Once Snowflake SSO is enabled, users on the project will be able to configure their credentials in their Profiles. By clicking the "Connect to Snowflake Account" button, users will be redirected to Snowflake to authorize with the configured SSO provider, then back to dbt Cloud to complete the setup process. At this point, users should now be able to use the dbt IDE with their development credentials.
 
-### SSO OAuth Flow Diagram
+### SSO OAuth flow diagram
 
 <Lightbox src="/img/docs/dbt-cloud/dbt-cloud-enterprise/84427818-841b3680-abf3-11ea-8faf-693d4a39cffb.png" title="SSO OAuth flow diagram" />