Update CONSTITUTION.md #107
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Minor corrections and formating.
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| Any Cosmonaut can also become a Citizen of the AtomOne Hub by using their | |||
| address to stake ATOMs toward the AtomOne Hub and participate actively in | |||
| governance. The status of citizenship is granted in an autonomous manner. | |||
| governance. The status of citizenship is granted autonomously. | |||
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Do you really believe autonomously is better here? the difference is subtle, but to me in an autonomous manner seems more explicit
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I believe "autonomously" makes more sense here.
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| Imagine how easy it would be to create a fund and simply buy VISA… well not | |||
| even buy, but simply bond the capital of the market cap of VISA, of $391B. | |||
| That’s a lot of money, but if bonding that capital means one can take control | |||
| over the financial system, people would lend their money in a heartbeat. But | |||
| of the financial system, people would lend their money in a heartbeat. But | |||
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maybe, but over is a bit more impactful here, simbolizing a top-down strings-pulling.
Maybe I would leave it as is
Can you reply with some example? AFAIK, everywhere ATOM is mentioned, it's because it's supposed to be ATOM and not the ATONE token. |
Co-authored-by: Giuseppe Natale <[email protected]>
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I have checked again thoroughly, the readme file does not have any Atom/Atone anomaly in the current version. |
Co-authored-by: Giuseppe Natale <[email protected]>
Minor corrections and formatting. In many places, the token of AtomOne is referred to as ATOM/ATOMs, If not intended, it should be changed to ATONE/ATONEs.