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Edit first paragraph #17

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@jwharrie jwharrie commented Nov 5, 2018

Edit paragraph one to reorganize information and shorten paragraph length.
Remove certain words to shorten paragraph. Condense some sentences too.
Change order of information to (product uses) --> (download formats) --> (visual types and animation support).

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Edit paragraph one to reorganize information and shorten paragraph length.
Remove certain words to shorten paragraph. Condense some sentences too.
Change order of information to (product uses) --> (download formats) --> (visual types and animation support).
two --> 2
download pack --> download the pack
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nnixaa commented Nov 12, 2018

Hey @jwharrie, thanks for the suggestion! We will think it through.

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