diff --git a/index.html b/index.html index 05965803f..1839266a3 100644 --- a/index.html +++ b/index.html @@ -5555,7 +5555,7 @@

Patterns of Use

  • Passing the identifier of a [=credential=] to a centralized revocation server. -The centralized server can correlate the [=credential|credential's=] use across +The centralized server can correlate uses of the [=credential=] across interactions. For example, if a [=credential=] is used to prove age in this manner, the centralized service could know everywhere that [=credential=] was presented (all liquor stores, bars, adult stores, lottery sellers, and so on). @@ -5932,7 +5932,7 @@

    Content Integrity Protection

    Section [[[#integrity-of-related-resources]]] of this specification provides an -optional mechanism for ensuring content integrity of external +optional mechanism for ensuring the integrity of the content of external resources. This mechanism is not necessary for external resources that do not impact the [=verifiable credential=]'s security. However, its implementation is crucial for external resources where content changes could potentially