From 80b4b901aaa87d39c4a1293ffbbad1b5927106ec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Steven Higgs Date: Tue, 6 Feb 2024 16:22:44 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] EXM-54044: Reviewed post Signed-off-by: Steven Higgs --- ...ould_benefit_from_the_dita_xml_standard.dita | 17 ++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/topics/types_of_companies_which_would_benefit_from_the_dita_xml_standard.dita b/topics/types_of_companies_which_would_benefit_from_the_dita_xml_standard.dita index 2ca7c82f..74f43531 100644 --- a/topics/types_of_companies_which_would_benefit_from_the_dita_xml_standard.dita +++ b/topics/types_of_companies_which_would_benefit_from_the_dita_xml_standard.dita @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ - Types Of Companies Which Would Benefit from the DITA XML Standard + Types Of Companies Who Would Benefit From Using the DITA XML Standard Radu Coravu @@ -9,13 +9,13 @@ -

I would divide in general the companies which benefit from using DITA XML for their +

In general, I would divide the companies that benefit from using DITA XML for their technical documentation needs in three large sections:

Companies Creating Physical Products
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These companies create real-world objects, be them cars, refrigerators or +

These companies create real-world objects, such as cars, refrigerators, or computer chips. Each version of each product has an unique product ID and needs to be documented. Different products are sometimes similar in functionality but they also have some differences.

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Companies Creating Version-ed Software Products
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These companies provide software components which are version-ed and usually +

These companies provide software components that are version-ed and usually get installed on the client's side. As each client may have an older version of the product, user manuals for older versions need to be made available.

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Companies Creating Version-less Software Products
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These companies usually provide cloud based services, the end user receives - always access to the latest stable release, there is no user manual made - available for past releases.

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These companies usually provide cloud-based services, the end-user always + receives access to the latest stable release, and there is no user manual + made available for past releases.
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The benefits for companies would be the following: +

The benefits for companies would be as follows:

Benefits